Monday, October 1, 2007
Lions Circle Writing Endeavour
As I mentioned a couple of posts ago, the Shameless Lions Writing Circle has been geared up for a new project - to write a collective short story. Now frankly, I have my doubts and concerns about over 40 people writing one story... but I'll reserve judgement and we'll see how it goes.
The first four pieces have been written and I've been tagged by Minx to write the fifth bit - thank the goddess I wasn't left to write the conclusion, or even something somewhere near the middle. Thank you, Mistress Minx, for saving me from that!
In his rules Seamus suggests that we all post the picture, the entire story and then add our own bit - but as I said to him this makes the thing become altogether unwieldy. So... I'm just going to post the pic - see above - and my bit - and if it intrigues you in any way, then I suggest to you go here to read the start of the story and whatever may come after...
So, this is my offering:
Sebastian leaned back in his chair, ran his hand over the stubble on his chin and afforded himself a thin smile. So, she had finally turned up in Jack’s life again. Just like the proverbial bad penny.
He flicked through the images on the screen. Grace laughing. Gracing dancing. Grace lazing in the sun. His eyes ran over the curve of her body, lingering on the rise of her breasts, the pert roundness of her backside. Ah yes, Grace the Temptress. Grace who could have been anyone, had anyone. Grace who knew the world lay at her feet. And by god, she’d meant to conquer that world. Ultimately it hadn’t mattered to her who she might trample on to grab her dreams. Sebastian chewed his lower lip, remembering the advice he’d given her long ago. "Be careful what you wish and dream for, Gracie. Make your choices wisely." But she’d just laughed, ran a hand over his face and flicked his hair from his eyes – with that casual sense of ownership she had with every man who’d crossed her path.
Funny how things came full circle… From owning, she’d been owned. Strange that she should have fallen for Sebastian Carrebreu, the sauve Frenchman – his namesake. He had no doubt she’d long forgotten him, Sebastian Comptom – but at least she’d remembered Jack…
He remembered the night she’d told them… He and Jack were on their way to the Hampton’s to Jack’s folks’ place – Grace was supposed to join them. Instead she had waltzed into the apartment, her hair flying, her cheeks flushed and declared, "Boys, you’re going to have to go without me!"
The smile on Jack’s face had crumpled. "Why, what’s come up? Whatever it is, can’t you cancel?"
"Absolutely not! See, I’m getting married, darlings!" The glittering diamond on her ring finger flashed as she thrust out her hand.
"To who?" He remembered how Jack had clutched the back of the sofa.
"To Sebastian!"
He remembered the pain, the betrayal in Jack’s eyes as he’d turned to him, gasping.
"Not me," he’d said. "Dear God, she’d never marry me. Nor would I ever ask her." He’d noticed how she’d narrowed her eyes at him.
"Of course not. Don’t be daft, Jack. Oh no offense, of course, Seb…" Her voice had been loaded with meaning. "No, I’m marrying Sebastian Carrebreu. Remember," she said, her eyes gleaming, "we met him at that protest and then at the conference his company gave."
"But you barely know him!" Jack cried. "You can't! He’s…"
"Why ever not?! Oh God, Jack, don’t get all possessive on me now. That would be so tedious."
She’d blown air kisses at them and flounced from the room. Twelve years… It might have been yesterday. But now she was back…and in Jack’s arms. Oh how the mighty are fallen. Sebastian smiled. It was a cold smile which didn't reach his eyes. He took a last glance at the photographs in front of him, closed the images and glanced through the notes in the file. Unfinished business... but not for much longer. He opened his email and began typing.
Now, I'm tagging Verilion to write the next bit.
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18 comments:
Good twist AV, hopefully I won't be left with the conclusion of this story.
ok. i'm hooked. i only have one complaint. why is it the female protagonist always has a pert rounded backside? can't she just have a saggy, middle aged one after 12 years ??
just a thought. ha.
red
I hope for your sake you won't either, Kat! I am indebted to Minx for letting me be number five!
Well, personally, Red I'm a firm believer in keeping backsides pert and round - I found on the one occasion I let mine get saggy and middle aged, it kept hitting the steps every time I descended the stairs... Besides, pert round ones are more bouncy to sit on - and this is important to those of us who spend hours perched in front of our computers dreaming up fantasies...
So ha, too! ;-)
That's really good.
Thanks, Marie!
I can't believe how fast it's taken off! Wow!
Great dark twist, oh... Vanilla, very good.
Thanks!
Scarlett & Viaggiatore
This was good. It's always fun working on these collaborative short stories, because you never know where the next person will take the story.
Interesting project.
Also, I plan on posting my entry to the writing strengths meme today or tomorrow.
Ah yes, a pert rounded backside is a necessity! A good stair climber is a must have! :)
Fantastic twist, Vanilla. :)
Well, Scarlett, let's see where it goes from here, eh?
I have my doubts, frankly, Struggling Writer about a story that will have over 40 collaberators... But then maybe I'm just being a party-pooper :-)
Looking forward to reading your writing strengths meme!
Oh yeah, got to have a stairclimber, JD Though mind you speedwalking does a damn fine job too ;-)
"firm believer in keeping backsides pert and round ..."
heh.
nice use of adjectives: firm....
I'm intrigued by the photo but have no joined in on this one. About the book meme, I did that same one last year. Here: http://www.looseleafnotes.com/notes/2005/06/all_about_books.html
Of course, my answers might be different now.
Thank you, Red :-)
I think there may be a few who aren't joining in on this one, Colleen... Off to check out your book meme :-)
and he was looking at the photos from twelve years ago, I thought ( continuing the train of pert backside) :)
intersting concept!! and curious to see how it all ends.
Well, I reckon twelve years back she'd have had an absolute right to a pert backside - and without the need for stairclimbers!
Oh, this is very good, AV. Personally I am glad I didn't have to follow. Although I am still working on how I will get this onto Wilf's blog at all at the moment.
Hmm, yes, I see what you mean, Addy - take a look at what the Inner Minx did - she kept it really low profile - so perhaps you could do it that way and then say your Mad Aunt Caroline came and interfered with your blog, thinking it was a popular woman's magazine... Gotta think laterally, y'know :-)
Great little twist there. l cant believe how hooked lm getting. l guess what else would one expect look at all the great writers involved!
Great that you're enjoying it Cleopantha - will be interesting to see where it goes to - will require some deft writing as it advances to ensure all the pieces are held together.
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